Analysis of Angel in the palms
Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)
I lay the elderly child in the palm of the angels hand with a kiss on his forehead and I said I hope you understand that he is for keeps and a sea deeper than an earthly sun weeps his demise.
The Arch angel said beautiful words dear poet, I have listened to your eulogy and respect you for your passionate side but be equitus to me and those above me for I have standing becond your centuries of existence.
I said if you take this soul be truthful with him and see him well in spirit for he is of a unique and highly educated advancement of the human condition soul family.
The Arch angel said I expect poetic words to define you in your dignity and enhance your conversation so that one day when we can one day speak on the level of angelic dialogue I can increase your Godly dialogue so you are more fluent.
I said I have obtained an openness with oneness and heard the whys and wearabouts of all conversive eventualities and I am indeed ready for higher segmentation of the existing universal spirit living crossing of language.
The Arch angel said although indeed you will one day be recognised again for your ancient contributions to the living world at this time you have extensive examination of your bodies reflex response and your souls expression of it in such ways as humility and humbility.
I said indeed my colloquial is uniquly pitched at a specialised audience than you are used to recieving and I can see flaws in the simple initial parts of your speech such as the lack of mansence in this simple English language due to limits of the human body and psychic/ sentient/ cognicent/ sub conscious soul connection between individual beings.
The Arch angel said I have recieved word from my overseers and take head to respect the life opportunities you have been given compared to those short lived individuals and make most of your diminishing time on this most precious planet for your stakes have been raised to termultuous levels with God.
I said I have received word of your message and indeed agree to create a sensible awareness and attempt a less self centred contribution to the thoughts of spirit in human brain and aura during such times as I am not panicking about Armageddon and soul destroying self examination.
The Arch angel said indeed I recognise your breakdown of language and you have been called in numerous directions but you are ultimately responsible for carrying the thoughts to an extreme above your ascensions time grade.
And so the elderly child was given mediatory influence between Gods and man for a time until such a transparent purpose was clarified and the elderly child was then committed completely to the resting place in angelic responsibility.
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Characters | 2,697 |
Words | 485 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 11 |
Lines Amount | 11 |
Letters per line (avg) | 200 |
Words per line (avg) | 43 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 2,205 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 476 |
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Written on June 16, 2022
Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 16, 2022
Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 16, 2022
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