Analysis of The First Date
They say, your first date is going to be full of silent moments
Cause it's frightening, you don't know what to expect.
But when I was with you, I think automatically laugh loudly
Every piece of you is so lovely.
I'm sorry if you catch me in deep thoughts
Too many times I thought “I'm not lost”
Cause the keeper of the key to my heart, came back like a boss
I've learned to turn down the people that aren't good to me if you are the cause.
I've always loved taking care of other people, that's my place of value.
But until now, I still can't believe how I adore being taken care of, by you.
The first time I sneaked out, believe me, I didn't feel any anxiety.
Cause I know, my home, my safest place, was with me.
I'm still laughing remembering how cold we were when we stepped outside the e-trike.
I may not say it often but I found the person I like.
Thank you for being patient with me until the end of the night,
You are the first person I'll think of every time lightning will strike.
Scheme | XXAA XXXX BBAA CCXC |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (25%) |
Metre | 1111111011111010 111001111101 111111110100110 1001111110 1101111011 110111111 101010111111101 1111101011011111101 11110111010111110 101111101110110101111 0111110111101100100 111111101111 11100100111011111011 111111011101011 1111010110101101 11011011110011011 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,003 |
Words | 208 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 189 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 49 |
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Written on June 24, 2022
Submitted by jorrella_r on June 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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