Analysis of The mesmerised child with the golden eyes.



She tried to kiss Angel 2 on his perfect hand
Angel 2 said thank you for sharing your love now please understand
Your respect for me I plead for that there is no need
She said Angel 2 are you my love
And I know not of respect or those from above
Angel 2 said my friend you know them
Its the time for you to reflect
She said who should I pray for that would love me more than I
Angel 2 said pray for me if you'd surely try
For I can fall in or out
Just as often as you do
She said where does your love lead to Angel number 2.
Angel 2 said to a gateway that is so ever true
You'll no longer feel like this so lonesome and so blue
She said for what should I go there, I pray to you
Angel 2 said I'm your guidance and I want to preach to you
She said why didn't a God come
That you wouldst lead me to
Angel 2 said there surely is one but I have lost by breath on you
She said then why shouldn't we stay here
And hover in the air
Angel 2 said then to whom would we say our solumn prayer
She said they surely hear it
As clearly as the wind
What would they have us do there
When forgetting them's a sin
Angel 2 said let's just go through
you're not ready to understand.
But if I may golden eyed child
Let me hold your hand.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (27%)
Metre 11111011011 10111110111101 1011111111111 11101111 011110111101 10111111 10111101 11111111111111 10111111101 1111011 1110111 111111111010 101101111101 1110111110011 111111111111 10111100111111 11110011 111111 1011101111111111 111110111 010001 1011111111011 1111011 110101 1111111 1010101 1011111 1110101 11111011 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,218
Words 266
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 943
Words per stanza (avg) 262
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Written on June 24, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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