Analysis of Water Fountain Minds



Water Fountain Minds

A device for the control of decorative water flows
Single causes with no exceptions, long roads with no exits
With everything for some, the only way to win, is not to play
Money spent is just another vote of approval
My insurance policies are my corporate sponsors

Lest we forget who we are, better we build roads to our homes ourselves
Never replenishing anything the Natural World freely provides us
Is the best definition that defines the meaning of no co-operation
Talking about problems use to work, now it only serves as entertainment

Flipping on our water fountain minds, money is heroin for the mind
Like another brick in the digital wall, thinking thoughts is not enough
With no connection to reality, we marvel at our consciousness
We think, therefore we are, a gift supposedly only meant for people
We pretend new discoveries, but all we do is copy Nature,

Forgotten by discrimination, we don’t even know, we know nothing
As the Sun goes round the Earth, the center of nothing, but lost arts
New fires burn daily with smoke, the new light of day
This planet, oasis rocky with water, a naturally wayward station
Born again is bartering without profits, just right for wandering souls
Those that really care always trying, without help, they have to work harder
Always burning out, we only remember to praise them


Scheme X XXABX XCDX XXCBE XXADXEX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 00110011100101 101011010111110 110110101111111 1011101011010 10101001110010 1101111101111101001 100100100100110011 101010101010111010 100110111111011010 1011010101101100101 101010010011011101 11010110110110100 11111010100101110 10110100111111010 01010010111011110 1011101010110111 1101101101111 11001010110010001010 101110001101111001 11101110011111110 1101110010111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,349
Words 236
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 4, 5, 7
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 218
Words per stanza (avg) 46

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Those that really care always trying, without help, they have to work harder. Always burning out, we only remember to praise them

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Written on June 20, 2020

Submitted by rzwilling on June 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:10 min read
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Robert Zwilling

Robert Zwilling is digital artist and environmental poet who uses verbal brush strokes to illustrate life in the Natural World using jazz style text and pictures. more…

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