Analysis of Betrayal



The Arch Angel Lucifer cried at the betrayal of man against his name and stunning beauty as he was channelled by a psychic.
As he did so all the Arch angels and angels shed a tear in empathy except Arch Angel Jophiel who instead shon like a cross to contain Arch angel Lucifers fears and sadness.
A splinter of light like a sword shon on his finger in an uncontrollable twitch and lit up splinters of crosses within all the angels tears, and one thought of light fell onto the chest of Christ piercing his heart and shaking his core as he was holding a child angel's shoulders. He pulled the cross from his heart and watched Arch Angel Jophiel touch Lucifer's psychic on the arm to comfort her and he remembered how she had been betrayed as a child when her clothes had been stolen from her by a brand new friend and this made him afraid to trust. It was not until many years later, that he realised how much he had grown, and then he grieved the loss of trust he too had had to overcome with all the support of heaven and earth surrounding him.


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Poetic Form Tercet 
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Characters 1,045
Words 201
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 279
Words per line (avg) 66
Letters per stanza (avg) 837
Words per stanza (avg) 199
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Written on July 01, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on July 01, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on July 01, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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