Analysis of Eternal Afflicted Light



He has broken my strength,
And has shortened my days;
Weakened at such a length,
By the sinner who strays.

Take me away O God,
Whose years endure throughout;
Generations have flawed,
In having so much doubt.

God laid the foundation,
With the work of His hands;
Heavenly creation,
By His voice He commands.

He changes like a robe;
As sinners pass away;
Perish around the globe,
But the Lord will still stay.

The Lord remains the same,
For His years have no end;
His children shall proclaim,
His servants as His friend.

Their offspring established,
As they shall dwell secured;
But sinners are punished,
No longer be endured.

Copyright ©2022 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB XCXC DEDE FGFG HIHI JKJK X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 111011 011011 101101 101011 110111 110101 01011 010111 110010 101111 100010 111101 110101 110101 100101 101111 010101 111111 110101 110111 11010 111101 110110 110101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 669
Words 144
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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Do Not Hide Your Face Psalm 102:23-28

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Written on July 02, 2022

Submitted by richards.77936 on July 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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