Analysis of Out of time

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



I dream of your skyline
You sit their so devine
House of innocence and wine
Pure your path to one so fine
I love you so plane a line
But its all I can to shine
Short am I you to pine
How can I fix your rhyme

You have answers there
Sat upon a heavenly chair
Why so secretive a bare
Of burdens far and there
Broken is your truth
Flawed are you by youth
I know you made all I spoof
So listen now to proof

Your heart is like a wave
It finds me how I stave
Try comfort and to pave
When you are in your cave
Your butterfly is made
I stay so long and grave
We are one for today
So fragile in our stay

And run to you and from
When I'm gone I am gone
You may take away your hand
Make it hard to understand
Without trying you are you
So complex to see through
I can barely hold your mind
That one day I may find

Your soul speaks oft to mine
Your body built like wine
Each drop falls like a sign
Were such tears ever mine
I recall you like a crime
For passion fresh as lime
From the start you did call time
Burning candle small and tiny

And mine a crumbling tower
You hold my deepest power
With heart you overpower
Sweeter each encounter
Your music so much louder
You hair so much browner
My words turn so sour
So shorter grows our dauer


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111101 1110001 1111111 1111101 1111111 111111 111111 11101 10101001 1110001 110101 10111 11111 1111111 110111 111101 111111 110011 111011 11011 111101 111101 1100101 011101 111111 1110111 111101 0110111 110111 1110111 111111 111111 110111 111101 011101 111101 110111 1011111 10101010 01010010 1111010 111010 101010 1101110 111110 111110 11011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,231
Words 263
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Written on July 06, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on July 06, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on July 06, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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