Analysis of If I May Ask.



If I may ask,
who the person is
that wills your task
and asks you to live?
If I may ask,
what do you give
behind all the masks
to the core of your earth?
If I may ask,
where are you going
under a sun to bask
or into a sun and your own god?
If I may ask
when will you get there
and feel love last
for infinite bliss?
If I may ask
how will it know
if its ready to rule
a lifetime of evolution?


Scheme AbacAdefAgahAijkAlmn
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 1111 10101 1111 01111 1111 1111 01101 101111 1111 11110 100111 101010111 1111 11111 0111 11001 1111 1111 111011 011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 391
Words 96
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 295
Words per stanza (avg) 89

About this poem

Permission to be you.

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Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on July 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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