Analysis of Farewell to The Skipper
The sloop was ready, buoyant
quietly appointed into the familiar cove of a salty life
contained like a pearl
luminous, glowing
waiting for its purpose to be cracked open.
Decks scrubbed
fenders pulled up
hatch opened
sails unfurled and poised for departure
with lines coiled in tight, exquisite circles of
expectation
ready for release.
Anchor and chain dropped into aquatic memories
tended by watery nymphs
while pelicans flew in precise military formation
to salute a worthy life well-lived.
Gulls gathered to hold vigil
bobbing, perched, attentive and watchful
on mirrored surfaces
reflecting into a boundless sky
a life more colorful than two expansive horizons could
possibly contain.
Close by, a steadfast breakwater measured the ebb of
time
while stubborn mussels held tight and did not want to
let go.
But it was getting late,
it was time to go,
and the course had already been charted.
It was a beautiful night,
cold enough for hot buttered rum to warm the journey.
A crescent moon hung like a lantern,
casting silver beams across the ether.
Starry sirens sang to the sextant,
orchestrations of complex geometries
constellated an ocean of galaxies,
and the sextant beckoned to shimmering beacons
set to guide a maiden voyage into eternity.
The skipper steadied his hand on the helm,
set the course
adjusted the sails
and eased the sloop
into the midnight sea.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0111010 100010010010110101 01101 10010 10111011110 11 1011 110 101011010 11101100101 010 10101 1001101010100 1011001 11001001100010 101010111 1101110 101010010 110100 010010101 011100110100101 10001 11011010011 1 110101101111 11 111101 11111 0011010110 1101001 1011110111010 010111010 1010101010 10101101 0101100100 11101100 00110110010 11101010010100 0101011101 101 01001 0101 01011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,387 |
Words | 249 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 26, 12, 5 |
Lines Amount | 43 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 373 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 75 |
About this poem
In memory of my father Don Crie, who loved the ocean and spent much of his life sailing her waters. I have saved a painting I gave him once of a sloop anchored in a quiet harbor.......ready to sail. This painting was the inspiration for this poem, and talks about how the skipper is preparing for his last sail across the ocean into his next life and adventures on the other side.
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Written on March 10, 2021
Submitted by spiritu700 on July 31, 2022
Modified on April 12, 2023
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