Analysis of Another Child



Lord, Eternal God, Father Christ,

Thank You for giving me another child
The curly blonde baby angel said “Tell the priest that the babies are safe in heaven
God wants to give us women chance/choice to save ourselves”

My children are enough
They’re in day care
Preparing for their diaper and snacks- dropping them off and heading for work
At the end of my 9-5 job

I would pick them up
Head home- get them dinner
Baths
Bedtime stories

Doing laundry every other night, and again
By Friday evening I was wiped out
Please give me more strength and perseverance to do my task to them
You told the baby angel that the babies are safe in heaven

My choice is to return this baby to You through abortion Liberty
If it is a sin
Forgive me but I want to be a good mother to my children,
thank You for your forgiveness.


Scheme X XAX XXXX XXXX XXXA XXAX
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10101101 1111010101 010110101101101011010 11111101111001 110101 1011 010111001101101011 101111 11111 111110 1 110 1010100101001 110101111 111110010111111 1101010101011010 111101110111010100 11101 0111111101101110 1111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 843
Words 167
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

Hello, I wrote this poem after reading the stories of the women in abortion. I'm a Catholic or Roman Catholic & I want to be a saint.

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Submitted by mjacqueline964 on July 27, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Hello, I'm a Filipino-American who's disabled. I worked on the Abortion women because I want to be a saint. I did not graduate, have no profession or career. Please pray for me, thank u. more…

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