Analysis of Human Conditions

j.e 2001 (Saipan)



my heart is heavy, my soul is too
save me from this human condition.

I need rest so I may sleep forever and
escape this depressing heaviness.

a mind so full
my body that played by the rules
your words so cruel

care for my bare heart
I’ll always be by your side
even if you unravel me apart.

Pull me to waste
And the sweetest of taste

that my heart is made of
which would make your teeth ache

and how It took you so long to see
All the Beauty I could be

Did you forget I am a hideous crier
Often it’s because you are such a beautiful liar

Please i beg
Could you show me some care

Enough I suffer from these human conditions
Could you be something my heart can bare?


Scheme XX XA XAX BXB CC XX AX DD XE AE
Poetic Form
Metre 111101111 111110010 11111110100 0110101 0111 11011101 11110 11111 111111 1011010101 1111 001011 111111 111111 011111111 1010111 110111010010 10101111010010 111 111111 011101110010 111101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 704
Words 157
Sentences 6
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Written on May 28, 2022

Submitted by Jayelieisar on July 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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