Analysis of Immortality

Joshua W Oluyemi 2002 (Osun state)



What is life? Is it an archetypical phenomenon or an agreed-upon notion?
Many beings travail this plane but only a few possess erudition.
Quadrillions of creatures are driven by their instincts, save a few who can ponder.
What does it mean to live? They ruminate about this consciously as they wander.
Is life supposed to have an expiry date?
Is there a certified glorious event for a particular date?
Every creature, whether sentient or not faced many foes but everyone is equal in this regard, they all fell to one.
It's name is death, the end of all life, the bringer of peace and sorrow and every time it fought, it always won.
For years, sentient creatures have sought to combat that foe.
They turned to physics, alchemy, magic but still, they could never go toe to toe.
It's the real quandary between life and death.
The constant struggle amongst all those who draw breath.
No matter the achievements or feats of a man, death claims his life as prize.
But still, the hearts of men wouldn't waver, to conquer that foe, they pay any price.
With this long drawn-out war that has lasted since the beginning of life? The great quest of the exploits of those in temporality.
What shall happen, will we find a way to conquer the stipulated mortality?
Or shall in the passage of time, will all lives be extinguished and relentlessly destroyed by death's cruel hand?


Scheme AABBCCAADDEEFGCHI
Poetic Form
Metre 111111101011010110 101001111100101010 111011011101011110 1111111100111001110 1101111101 11010100011001001 10010101111101110110010111111 11110111101110100100111111 111101111011 11110100101111101111 10110001101 010100111111 110001011101111111 11011110101101111101 111111111010010110111011101 11101110111001000100 110010111111010001000111101
Characters 1,377
Words 260
Sentences 21
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 64
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,081
Words per stanza (avg) 241

About this poem

Many people have desired to live forever. The poem depicts of the progression of events between two forms of life (Sentient and non sentient). Only the sentient ones have tried to achieve immortality but yet, death comes for all that draws breath.

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Written on July 26, 2022

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Modified on March 05, 2023

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