Analysis of It's not real



F. It's not real  

Lie lies and more lies
A lost child is a loose child  
A happy girl is a cursed teen  
A dying girl is a freed child

Kiss me!! kiss me!! kiss... Me  
How do I tell my mother I am my father's sin?  
How do I tell my father I am my uncle's dream?  
How do I tell my fears to God when I am his messenger as well?

His faith in me is as pure as it can be but how do I tell my brother I am tainted?  
Caged by my home how do I tell my lover I'm darker than his fears and dirtier than his thoughts for me?  
How do I tell myself that every kiss is not real but a dream


Scheme X XAXA BXCX XBC
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11011 0111011 01011011 01011011 111111 1111110111101 1111110111101 11111111111110011 11011111111111111101110 11111111110110111010011111 1111111001111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 588
Words 144
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

The poem is about how young girls are taunted in their years and how they fear telling those they care about how much they suffer through because they too can't stand how much pain they are hiding from themselves.

Font size:
 

Written on July 15, 2000

Submitted by mamashelaramokone32 on July 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

44 sec read
1

Ramokoni Mamashela

Young aspiring poet from South Africa more…

All Ramokoni Mamashela poems | Ramokoni Mamashela Books

1 fan

Discuss this Ramokoni Mamashela poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "It's not real" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 3 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/133461/it%27s-not-real>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    27
    days
    12
    hours
    53
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Do not go gentle into that good _______. Rage, rage against the dying of the light
    A day
    B end
    C fire
    D night