Analysis of Peace, Please



Someone is fighting for democracy
Some one is fighting for bones and flesh
When will we see peace on earth
Not even written on the walls
Who is deciding, who’s to live and who’s to die ?
In despair we bow our head
There is no peace on earth, and need to repair

To hate strongly is very easy
To love, one needs a strong mind
The world is suffering from pain
Where all the flowers gone?
Only black roses blossom everywhere
And the bell always struck a wrong note.

No rifles can shoot roses
Only  rivals rule the world

The world is suffering from pain
The wrong will fail if the right prevails

Let us listen to the words of wisdom
Let us listen to the lips of great spirit
God is alive always and not dead nor sleep
Let’s pray for the peace on earth
And end the vulture’s prey

Let’s end the thundering cannon
Bring the peace on earth, goodwill to men

The world is suffering from pain.


Scheme axbxxxc axDxcx xx Dx xxxbx xx D
Poetic Form
Metre 111010100 111101101 1111111 11010101 11101110111 00111101 11111101101 111011010 1111011 01110011 110101 101101010 00111011 1101110 1010101 01110011 011110101 1110101110 11101011110 1101101111 1110111 010101 11010010 101111111 01110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 897
Words 179
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 2, 2, 5, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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With terrorism exists everywhere, the whole world needs peace and prosperity

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Written on July 20, 2022

Submitted by deva_1970 on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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R Devarajan

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