Analysis of The grim fiance



          The grim fiancé

Something is not right about the man your going  to marry
He is weird and secretive
His eyes are dark with no soul
When he visit the house for a party  and I went into the garage
To get a case of soda he  pushed me onto the ground and and assaulted me
The threaten me is I told a soul
When I got up and went to the bathroom I cried
You tell me about the wedding that she is happy to have
But I my mind he is nothing but a monster
I went to the police station to make a report they told me a
About his criminal history with women
He marries then and rape them and kills them
I told him what he  did to me  and they found my breast
The police said to tell my sister
When I left the police station I called her up crying and  I told her
What her fiancé did to Me
She she ferrous laughed and hung up the phone
At that point i she told me that we are going to Mexico to get married
I begged and pleaded with her not to go
But she hung up the phone  and left for Mexico
Three days later I got a phone call and it was from the police
A woman has been raped and murdered
They need me to identify the body
I took the next flight to Mexico
To identify the body and and I cried and I saw my sister dead
She was shot three times in the chest
I warned her to not marry this man
We took the body back to Chicago and we had a funeral I cried along
Out mother who cried if her sister and daughters that we lost
To a monster


Scheme A BXCXBCXXDXXXEDDBXXAAXXBAXEXAXD
Poetic Form
Metre 011 101110101110110 1110100 1111111 111001101001101001 11011101111001000101 010111101 11110110111 111010101111011 111111101010 11100110110011110 011100100110 1101011011 1111111101111 001111110 111001101101100110 101111 1110101101 1111111111101101110 1101010111 11110101110 1110110110111001 010111010 1111010010 11011110 101001000110111101 11111001 110111011 11010110101101001101 110111010010111 1010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,460
Words 329
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 30
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 555
Words per stanza (avg) 157

About this poem

This poem is about a woman who is getting married to a.man that has a hidden past

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Written on June 12, 2022

Submitted by Latoyakid69_1 on July 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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