Analysis of If You Want

Jared D Langley 1984 (Marion Indiana)



If you want the moon
I'll pull it from the sky
If you want the stars
I won't stop to ask why

If you want the clouds
I'll fly you in a plane
If you want a river
I'll dig one when it rains

If you want the ocean
I'll put a yacht where you wish
If you want a mountain
I'll get the one you pick

If you want a house built
I'll do my very best
If you want my time
You only need to request

If you want my heart
It's already in your hands
If you want my soul
It's yours, no demands


Scheme XAXA XXXX BXBX XCXC XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 11101 111101 11101 111111 11101 111001 111010 111111 111010 1101111 111010 110111 111011 111101 11111 1101101 11111 1010011 11111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 482
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on December 01, 2018

Submitted by deshane060815 on August 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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