Analysis of Her voice was like feathers.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



The sound of her soul
Rained over me whole
Like a shower of feathers
In a field of cloves
If she ended her song
I would sit in her sea
Missing her voice
For all eternity

But I hear it still
Within my mind
Such a gift from God
Of the gentlest kind
As soft as it touched
With each perfect verse
Matching the rhythm
Of my heart
submerged in echoes
that will never part


Scheme AAXXXBXB XCXCXXXDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 01101 11011 1010110 00111 111001 111001 1001 110100 11111 0111 10111 101001 11111 11011 10010 111 01010 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 366
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 10
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Written on August 29, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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