Analysis of Life
Life is nothing but a beautiful lie, A deception we live in, a place where we die, a manifestation that we create, But i hope it’s not mine I’m in the wrong mental state , my perception is off I’m in a whole lot of pain, the more that I push, the less that I gain, I need to do something but what can I do, in this revolution I can not start anew, I search for a way to think on my own, but the lack of conditioning might not bring me home, I feel if I start a new path to take, I will go crazy knowing all this was fake, that thought is so frightening I’ll just stay right here, waiting for death so I may disappear,
That thing that is blocking my will to succeed, what is its origin and what does it need, I feel that it’s sucking the life out of me, the more that I wait the faster it feeds, It captures souls I’m beginning to see, am I paranoid or is there a hex on me, my soul feels so empty I have no energy, I need to lay down now and live with out a remedy, I fear it’s to late, my mental state, is beginning to fade with every decision I make, with every breath that I take with every single mistake, help me please help me, I don’t want to end up in a fiery lake, a waste of a day is a waste of humanity
so please don’t
Just sit there in a misery, but it may be too late so please just sit still, just wait for eternity, that is what kills.
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Metre | 1110101001001011001111000101101111111100110110101110011110111101111111110111110101011110111101111111011010011111111110111111110101111111110011111101111101 1111101110111110001111111110011110111101011110110101111101110111111110111100111111011101001111111011010111100010111100111111001001111111111110010010110110110100 111 111001001111111111111101001111 |
Characters | 1,377 |
Words | 286 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 4 |
Lines Amount | 4 |
Letters per line (avg) | 256 |
Words per line (avg) | 73 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,023 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 291 |
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Written on August 30, 2022
Submitted by Thicker1 on August 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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