Analysis of The Repenter

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



They grew into one.
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I forgive others.
They opened their eyes.
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I forgive others.
They took their first breath of air.
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I forgive others.
They lived for a second.
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I forgive others.
They learnt forgiveness.
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I forgive others.
They repented to Mother/Father God.
I'm sorry. Forgive me. I forgive others.


Scheme aBcBdBeBfBgB
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 11001110110 11011 11001110110 1111111 11001110110 111010 11001110110 11010 11001110110 1010110101 11001110110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 412
Words 81
Sentences 24
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 312
Words per stanza (avg) 70

About this poem

Day by day. Piece by piece. Second by second. Your soul needs forgiveness.

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Written on September 08, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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