Analysis of Forbidden Love: The Shade of Blue

Jan Mariel Sas 2001 (Parañaque City)



Blue is where sincerety lies
Known for being calmed and mild.
But Blue is not just a color in mine
Blue is she, that can't be mine.

I own the sky, she owns the sea
Her thoughts are wide and free.
Possessing an infrequent beauty
Resting at the bottom of Atlantis City.

We're both Mythological goddess
A summoner of forbidden fondness.
Zues constructed the horizon
An act of strict prohibition.

Horizon is my sister
But also a vicious traitor.
One of the pillar of Zues
Child of another hues.

I am the sky
She's the sea.
We keep staring each other
Till the life after.

The sea and me are Blue
She appreciates me more than I do.
I was caged in top of her
But she remains my greatest admirer.

The sea is too distant to reach
But we're both willing to take a breach.
She sends me parts of her: by evaporation
I gave her a unique gift: the constellation.


Scheme AXBB CCCC DDEE FFAX XCFF GGFF HHEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (71%)
Metre 11111 1110101 1111101001 1111111 11011101 011101 010101010 101010101010 11010010 01110010 10100010 1111010 0101110 11001010 1101011 110101 1101 101 1110110 10110 010111 101011111 1110110 1101110010 01111011 111101101 11111010010 11000110010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 856
Words 183
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

An Epic love story of the goddess named sky and sea. Shows how Zues made his way to cease them.

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Written on August 17, 2022

Submitted by janmarielsas27 on August 17, 2022

Modified on March 30, 2023

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