Analysis of LIFE SAYS LONG



With great think,
and thoughts of goodness .
Live happily life long,
Life says long.

Life is differ and differ to all,
Some raise up then some fall.
With good deeds memorable,
Be yourself and other's favourable.

Never feels sad,
Showing love makes glad.
Life says live wide,
We should be ourselves guide.

Always raise as life is struggle,
Be  strong for yours to be able.
Life told me for myself,
you are for you believe yourself.

As the time life teach all,
someone's win then someone's fall.
who makes wish he will win,
where is will there is win.
                                                                                END


Scheme XXAA BBCB DDEE CCFF BBGGX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 01110 110011 111 111001011 111111 1111000 1010101 1011 10111 1111 1110011 1111110 11111110 11111 11110101 101111 11111 111111 111111 1 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 641
Words 125
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem wants to teach you that if you go on doing good deeds then your life will also be fair but if not then you will lost in the darkness of bad things.Although you wish and wants to fulfil your wishes and opportunities you can't because bad is blind.

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Submitted by jenish on August 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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