Analysis of My first periods

Mohit 1998 (Haryana)



First time in life, I saw a spot
It was impure, whose mind has rot.
It is natural, we never been taught
Freaking my mind, what hell I brought
Everyone was saying, some disease I got
Neither body gets it, nor mind support.
No ray of hope, where do I sought
Red river of blood, sudden burst in draught.
Whole day has ruined, by bloody blood clot.
Bullied by friends, I Cried alot.
Feeling so low, but still I Fought.
Aware the people, and changed their thought.
That don't be afraid, by big red dot.
Started open discussion and things has sort.
People now agree and I can quote.
If life is a river, menstrual blood is boat.


Scheme AABBACBDAABBACEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 11011111 1110011011 10111111 1011010111 1010111101 11111111 1101110101 1111011011 10111101 10111111 010100111 111011111 10100100111 101010111 111010100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 626
Words 130
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 478
Words per stanza (avg) 118
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