Analysis of Path to Betterment



Today, I think of surviving
Wts the important  for living
I thinking, thinking n thinking
Some facts lies in mind
Why we are not kind
Is the matter of mind?
Then again I kept stress  on mind
No, its the matter  of sacrament
Which is so imprtant
Maintain the sacrament in life
So that we can out of trifles
 Want to get the benediction
Have to live in deep affection
Its the penance of our parents
 Then, we are ignorant
Sacrament is the essence of austerity
Should keep in mind tis fact
Dont live in always  varity
Keep so much sacrament
If you need betterment
  By jyotsna


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 574
Words 109
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 454
Words per stanza (avg) 111
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Written on June 08, 2022

Submitted by devhallmark on August 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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