Analysis of peace

maryam javed 2003 (karachi)



I love you but I just need a space tonight
It's nothing to do with you, I just want to be somewhere quiet

Would you help me, if you knew what I'm going through
or like everyone, would you leave me too?

Wish I could open up, but guess I'm used to being alone
got so many people by my side, but they all seem unknown

I don't know why my head keep messing with me While they all think I'm okay, can't they really see?

I feel so helpless, want to escape from this town
I hate it here, everyone keeps letting me down

I keep telling myself I will be okay
 Maybe I will, but till then can you stay?


Scheme XX AA BB X CC DD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110101 110111111111110 111111111101 111011111 111101111111001 111010111111101 1111111101111111111101 111101101111 11111011011 111011111 1011111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 605
Words 134
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Written on August 31, 2022

Submitted by maryamjaved.xo on August 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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