Analysis of SOME THING THAT GOD CAN'T SAY



struggling all day long, we are tired somewhere,
and sometimes we become agnostic by the path that god makes;
but you know where the problems take palace,

god has no phone that he can call us to say..

hey don't!! don't get out of the track,
just take one step ahead and I'll be there always at your back;

And some times we become fool, we rely on the people who are fake,
and believe those plenty excuses they make;

but god can't warn us with a warning bell and say ..

stop!! be careful, trust me, don't trust them,
I know if would be cheated, I'm the one whom you gonna blame;

And god can't meet us personally in a meeting to say..

see!! this is the plan of life that i have made,
trust on my timings, you are not late,
I'm gonna give you and this is the date,
i am god, i know where and when, i don't need any reminder to set;

neither he can do a video call to say...

hey look!! i am real, all i need is your faith,
be ready for something dazzling to get,
i am doing everything for you, can't you just WAIT...


Scheme XXX A BB CC A XX A XDDE A XED
Poetic Form
Metre 10011111101 001101010101111 1111010110 11111111111 11111101 11110101111111 01110111011010111 00111001011 111111010101 111011111 111111010111101 011111000001011 11101111111 11111111 1101101101 111111011111001011 101110100111 11111111111 11011010011 111010111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,020
Words 231
Sentences 9
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 4, 1, 3
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

This poem is about never loosing hope, we face so many problems because god can't come and talk with us. but though he can't say something to us we should here his words and always keep faith in him that he is with us and he always worries about us..

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Submitted by shreevallbh.0111 on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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