Analysis of Chamber of God



He struck her so hard she fell to her knees
And showed him mercy for not loving him enough
I forgive you she laughed then she cried
He raped her for the hundredth time and she came without feeling
He demanded tell me to love you
She said I love you more than any touch of your body
Something he had taught her long ago
Namaste he said you can get dressed now
Then she put on her school uniform
And they both thought
I'm done with you
Then they assessed their bodies and minds and then thought to their souls
I love you but are you mad?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111101 011101110101 101111111 110101010110110 101011111 11111111011110 101110101 11111111 11110110 0111 1111 110111001011111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 537
Words 110
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 426
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Written on September 10, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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