Analysis of Tears in the light

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



The light dimmed
as she faced her angelic brother
crying with empathy for one another.
Their thoughts synchronised.

They wiped each others face
then turned back into light
so that the love could hold them tight
in its pure embrace.

Their light shon deeper
into the remaining past
until they were lost
into candlelit prayer


Scheme ABBA CDDC BXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 011 11101010 10110011010 111 111101 111011 11011111 01101 11110 0100101 01101 0111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 326
Words 62
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Written on September 10, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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