Analysis of Heavens touch



Asway in your arms
I fill with your charm
Never near any harm,
Echoes of anger or alarm
You're without delay
When my clouds turn to grey
And you show me the way
To true love on the bay
Where the words that you say
Take my soul heart away
With each ray on display
In a land full of play
And we spend every day
Building a castle in the clay
We can be straight or gay
And we live for each day
Every word as we pray
Helps our hearts to stay
In the Lord Gods array
And as his mind does convey
We gather to obey
And we sit in the hay
Full of flowers in full spray
Like the sound of the jay
Dancing its sweet ballet
And we no longer stray
From the light in betray
Where our thoughts portray
Our honesty to repay
Loves glory underway
Wrapped in clothes that don't fray
And our lives we replay
In heavens kind cabaret


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011 11111 101101 10110101 10101 111111 011101 111101 101111 111101 111101 001111 0111001 10010001 111111 011111 1001111 110111 001101 0111101 110101 011001 1110011 101101 101101 011101 101001 110101 10100101 11001 101111 0101101 010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 808
Words 168
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 33
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 639
Words per stanza (avg) 167
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Written on September 11, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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