Analysis of Seen



When I write I see your hand on the pen
As I think I look at your face staring at the page
As my chest rises I watch your chest fall
I hold the paper on your bended knee
When my heart stirs its your toes that curl
I am the paper but you are the tare
the piece that says
I'll leave you
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Scheme ABCDEFGH
Poetic Form Nonet (44%)
Metre 1111111101 1111111110101 1111011111 1101011101 111111111 1101011101 0111 111 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 348
Words 67
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 220
Words per stanza (avg) 65
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Written on September 16, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 16, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 16, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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