Analysis of life im done with you
Kayla King 2005 (kansas city)
im only 17
and i feel like im dying
I'm getting sad too soon
I hope I make it 'cause I'm trying
I've loved and I've lost
And I realized that it's all my fault
Wish someone loved me enough
To catch me when I fall
Hmm
And I know it's kinda selfish but
It's not my choice to leave
'Cause I wish I could stay
But it's more of a need
For me to go away
I'm tired of the world hating on me
I wake up to the friends that I can't keep
And when the end is near and I'm asleep
I'll be my chasing dreams while counting sheep
Hmm, hmm
When I turn 18 , I'ma feel like I'm flying
I'm in the sky where, where I'm free and I'm smiling
But till then
Things will stay in the same
Things will never change
Life will be a mess
And that life I became hopelessly in love
With doing what my brain tells me to do
And life, I'm done with you
Scheme | ABCBDEFGHIJKLKAMMMHBBNHOPQRR |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110 0111110 110111 111111110 11011 011011111 111101 111111 1 011110101 111111 111111 111101 111101 1101011011 1111011111 0101110101 1111011101 11 1111111110 100111110110 111 111001 11101 11101 01110110001 1101111111 011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 817 |
Words | 177 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 28 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 616 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 176 |
About this poem
this poem is based on being done with life and just feeling numb
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Written on September 16, 2022
Submitted by babykayy231 on September 16, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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