Analysis of On paper.
God I feel shit.
Dear God
I've just had a piss.
You relieve the pain in my heart.
I'm not rhyming now.
Come into my life.
Nothings going to cum of it anyway.
Brighten my soul so that I can reach your pink sky.
Its not going to sky rocket.
Allow me to touch the collective of your mind.
Its not going to go viral.
Let me be a side to you that cannot be erased.
Even if it did I wouldn't give a fu$k.
Bless me with gracious dreams
I'd just expect them all to sky rocket.
Raise my gifts so I may loan a trinket from your night sky.
Then feel worse because idve been ungrateful.
Uplift my path that this hill may touch the floor of heaven.
Bit#h.
Holy lord God on high
Why am I here anyway?
Let me fulfil my purpose, beyond class and crass word.
Pull me out. Tag me out.
May time be patient on my footsteps.
Pointless fu$king game.
Every moment shines like a silver ring in a bed of golden caskets.
I'd rather be hated than loved.
Thank you for sharing my love with me.
Sometimes.
Through the dark times and the light times.
Why did you lock me in the washing machine as a kid?
Wrap me in your tender words.
You're doing it here!
I feel your miraculous works in me.
Locking me in a dark room every night.
Gentle sleep.
Having to turn on the light to reach the toilet.
See me safe in the light of your Godly soul.
All I'm doing is waiting,
experiencing is how to die.
My poem disintegrates in your hands.
How it feels to die.
Let me dissolve your fears
I can't be more honest than that.
Grant me honesty and devine truth.
Goodbye x
Never let me go.
Hope you like it.
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Scheme | AX XX XX BC DX EX BX DC EX XC BX XX XX XF GG XX XF XX DX XCX CX XX XX AA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 11 11101 10101011 11101 10111 1010111110 101111111111 11101110 011110010111 11101110 1110111110101 101111101011 111101 1101111110 11111110101111 1110111010 10111111101110 11 101111 111110 111110011011 111111 11110111 10111 1001011010100111010 11011011 111101111 01 10110011 11111001001101 1101101 11011 1110100101 10100111001 101 101110111010 11100111101 1110110 010001111 110010011 11111 110111 11111011 111000011 11 10111 1111 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,602 |
Words | 381 |
Sentences | 44 |
Stanzas | 24 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 49 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 50 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 13 |
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Written on September 16, 2022
Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 16, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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