Analysis of Tired

Julie Carranza 1086 (Los Angeles)



At 6 I hear him accost my sister,
I'm tired
At 7 they send HER away; soon it'll be my turn,
I'm tired
At 11 nothing has happened BUT I met drugs,
I'm tired
At 14 I've lost track of time, days even months,
I'm tired
At 16 I'm lost I can't remember myself and I can't find my mom,
I'm tired
At 18 I'm pregnant; someone will finally Love me,
I'm not so tired


Scheme aBcBdBeBfBgb
Poetic Form
Metre 111101110 110 111001110111 110 1101101111 110 1111111101 110 111110101011111 110 11101110011 11110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 356
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 260
Words per stanza (avg) 75

About this poem

My journey to recovery

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Written on September 01, 2022

Submitted by Juliecarr04 on September 17, 2022

Modified on March 28, 2023

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