Analysis of I surrender

Julie Carranza 1086 (Los Angeles)



Touch me lightly
Kiss me tender
Bite my neck, I surrender
Caress my body and pull my hair
I got goosebumps everywhere


Scheme ABBCC
Poetic Form Cinquain  (60%)
Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 1110 1110 1111010 011100111 11110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 118
Words 23
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Written on January 01, 2000

Submitted by Juliecarr04 on September 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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