Analysis of When I was a waterfall



When I was a waterfall I rode the moonlight river
It widened to its precipas
And almost made me quiver
I tipped the edge and off I flew
Falling like a child
I jumped and splashed every puddle that had been on every side
But then I returned to the river bed
Where my weary teardrops
Had wet a weary head


Scheme ABACDEFBF
Poetic Form Nonet (33%)
Metre 111010110110 110111 011110 11010111 10101 11011001011111001 1110110101 11101 110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 302
Words 61
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 242
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Written on September 18, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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