Analysis of You make the stars fall into the sea of your eyes

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



You make the stars fall into the sea
of your eyes where the moons shine
for, only me.
They only cry behind your eyes.
I know there's love there for only me like a suns glare calling to me behind your eyes.
They only sigh behind your eyes.
As your heart cries it tries and tries to please my eyes with words of goodbyes.
They just don't cry
They just don't cry from my old story.
You're only mine there behind your eyes, and you're fine there in your disguise
And you light up glowing for me
You make the stars fall into the sea of your eyes
I just don't cry as you save me
I just don't cry from your old story.


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 611
Words 131
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 471
Words per stanza (avg) 124
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Written on September 18, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 18, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 18, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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