Analysis of An unattainable girl's dream path

Jesmiya Jaleel 2008 (Thodupuzha)



On the way home,strong breeze pass near me feels like a warm hug.

My tears are more than The water from the shower.

I can't control my tears when I realized I am not eligible for a school skit.

My eyes are full of tears, that I want to cry, but I didn't cry.

I realized that it's not my type of fashion

Hopefully, I'll find One Soon


Scheme X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111111011 111110101010 110111111011110001011 1111111111111101 11011111110 1001111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 338
Words 78
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

The worst day of my life, the day I couldn't get the one thing I wanted the most in my life I didn't get selected for an English skit which I dreamed of the most

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