Analysis of The day after you died.



The day after you died.
I died.
I felt my hands and they were dead.
Then I felt my body and it wouldn't stop crying.
I thought of something else.
That thought was you.
I told myself to eat but there was no food.
I was dead.
The day after you died.
I died.


Scheme AAbcdefbAA
Poetic Form Etheree  (50%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 011011 11 11110101 1111100110110 111101 1111 1111111111 111 011011 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 256
Words 63
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Written on September 18, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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