Analysis of Bachpan

Janhvi jaiswal 2004 (Uttar pradesh)



Bachpan kitna khubsurat hota tha na,
Na koi chhal na kapat man kitna saaf hota tha na,
Na kisi chij ka dar na hi koi sharm,
Bas man me umang,
Kbhi haar na manane ka hunar na kuch galat karne ka dar,
Bachpan sachme kitna khubsurat hota hai na.
Kbhi kbhi me sochti hu kue bade ho jate hai hum,
Kyu vo bachpan kho dete hai hum,
Kbhi kbhi man krta hai phle ki tarah bahar ghumne jau,
Aur Sare kapade gande krke aau,
Fir aa ke maa ko dikhau,
Aur fir maa date aur me ruth jau,
Fir vo aa k manage kuch achha banaye itne hi der me hum Sare bate bhul jaye.
Dosto se bhi milne k bahane the kbhi barf pani to kabhi chor sipahi khel nirale the,
Hamare jhagade kuch aise the aaj katti to kal batti aur fir wahi sab chehre the.
Bhari dopahari me bhi unke sath khelna pasand tha,
Ek dusare ki mummy ko please anty bolke manane ka hunar tha,
Kala-gora, ladka-ladki, bada-chota, sabko ek dosti k dhage me piroya tha.
Us bachpan ne har yaad me dil me sanjoya tha.
Sachme bachpan kitna khubsurat hota tha na.
Meri har galti ko bachhi samaj kar maaf kr dete the,
 mujhe aaj fir vo galti dohrane ka mn krta hai .
Mujhe ekbar fir us bachpan me jane ka man krta hai


Scheme AABCDAEEFGHFIJJJJJJAJHH
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11111111111 111111111 1111 111111111111 1111111 11111111111 1111111 11111111111 111111 111111 11111111 111110111111111111 11111101111111110 1111011111111110 111111111 1111011111111 1101110111111111 1111111111 1111111 11111111110 1111111111 11111111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,164
Words 251
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 884
Words per stanza (avg) 230

About this poem

This poem all about our childhood. And such cute thing childhood memories, childhood friend, and a innocent kids.

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Written on September 06, 2022

Submitted by Janhvijaiswal611 on September 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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