Analysis of Moment

Jalal Mahmoodiyan 1987 (Isfahan)



Neither you stay nor sadness
And not any of the people of this village
I swear by the worried bubble on the lip of a river
And as soon as that happy moment passed
Sorrow will also go away
So much so that it will only be a memory
The moments are naked
Never clothed in sorrow
You look in the mirror, no! The mirror is staring at you
If you laugh, he will laugh at you
And if you hate
What will he do with the mirror of the world?
Yesterday's closet was filled with longing and sadness and what a pity!
Tomorrow's packages, I wish I wish!
Inside this moment, but it is empty
Who will receive the chest area?
Don't open the sadness that came to him in this house
There is only one jugular vein left
By God, to the sadness of the promise of this house...


Scheme ABCDEFGHIIJKFLFMNON
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110 011010101110 111010101011010 0111110101 10110101 1111111010100 010110 101010 110010101011011 11111111 0111 11111010101 10101111001001010 011001111 0111011110 110101100 1100101111011 1110110011 1110101010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 750
Words 155
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 584
Words per stanza (avg) 151

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Submitted by mahmoodiyanjalal on September 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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