Analysis of MY LONELY DREAMS



Sky is looked so gloomy.
Sun is forget to rise.
Earth be fade its colour.
World be reduced its light.
Sharply;
Sable clouds are bust with a blasting sound.
Light be disappeared everywhere.
Atlast;
Earth be rived and sung a song dirgefully.
Sun be sung like mournfully -and-
Song be showered me with a rain.
In that snowy rain, i melted into this earth.
I just dance and enjoyed.
With me, birds are singing.
Angels are dancing -and-
Trees are blessing me.
Slowly;
My soulmate whispered something in my ear.
He come close to kiss me.
Sharply, a sound shake my ears.
Shockly, i opened my eyes.
I wake up from my dreams.
-and- look the world strangely.
Then i realized,
Its all my dreams.
My lonely dreams.


Scheme ABCDAECDFGHIJKGAACALBMANMM
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 110111 11111 110111 10 1011110101 110110 1 11101011 111110 11101101 011011100111 111001 111110 101100 11101 10 111010011 111111 1001111 111011 111111 010110 1110 1111 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 723
Words 151
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 541
Words per stanza (avg) 128

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Written on September 21, 2022

Submitted by sahilanizar727 on September 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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M Sahila Nizar

I am a literature student from kerala. I loved writing and from it I won many prizes. more…

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