Analysis of Not You



There's a body in the living room
But it's not you.
It's cold and dry.
You were never dry.
You had warm smooth hands.
You had moist kisses and huge laughter.
That body is not you.
You left us tonight at 11:45.
The body stays.
Everyone motions to it when they speak of you.
They sit next to it and kiss it.
But I know that's not you.
You left us at 11:45.
You were so much more than the bruises on your stomach.
The weak ankles.
The freckled skin.
You were wit and compassion.
You were sunshine and rain.
You were the songs that you sang in my childhood.
You were endless.
That body has ended.
But you never will.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101000101 1111 1101 10101 11111 111100110 110111 111011 0101 10101111111 11111011 111111 1111 1011110101110 0110 0101 1010010 10101 1001111011 1010 110110 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 623
Words 144
Sentences 22
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 465
Words per stanza (avg) 121

About this poem

I wrote this about 15 minutes after my mother passed away.

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Written on August 27, 2021

Submitted by AmazingJes on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jes Harrison

I am a Talented Theatre Teacher. A nonbinary person. A proud parent of two weirdos. Happily married to the world's best person. Oh. And I write for fun. more…

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