Analysis of We lose because we win



Life is a cesspool of depravity that no one can ever quell.
Life is miserable, an intense justification for hypocrisy
Life is unfair, the unequal privilege for every individual
Life is fury and vitriol; the pillory and shame you cannot escape

Do these words imprison your intrusive mind;
Which leads you to be entangled in every piece of your beliefs?
Do these words made you the person you want to become;
Or the person you are scared to outgrow?

Either one of those seas of excuses;
Life will never be fair and just
Life can be the reason for mourning or celebrating;
As well as having full of failure or success

But have you ever asked, what is this all about?
Why do we need to taste disgrace and humiliation?
Why do we need to fall and be defeated?
Why do we need to suffer and expiate?

The reasons that caught my peculiar mind:
We fall because we are preparing to rise
We were defeated because we are being strengthened
We lose because we are going to win


Scheme XXXX AXXX XXXX XXXX AXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101001111101 111000101001010100 110100101011000100 1110010001000111001 11101010101 11111010010011101 1111101011101 101011111 1011111010 11101101 1110101101100 111101110101 111101111101 1111110100010 11111101010 1111110010 0101110101 11011101011 1001001111010 1101111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 966
Words 195
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

I wrote this poem to inspire and bring hope for every person who are struggling in this life.

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Written on September 02, 2022

Submitted by jovelynmacasadia on September 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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