Analysis of Birthday Poem



For this birthday we cannot recite an
old poem but speak a new one for the
long pilgrimage you are taking.
Covid slammed the door on the
way we had learned to love the world.
Your talents spread like laughter,
amputated where they were most glorious.
Your sensitively of forboding
inhabit your nights and you wake
shaking and in peril.
We find ourselves in our corners
tending to wounds we have ignored.
As we watch you journey inwards
bushwacking through the flora your mind,
we celebrate not only your birth that
has brought benefit to so many but
vulnerability and courage to
walk each day in that liminal
space in danger of loosing your footing.
This is where your wings are made
to lift off and breath in that rarified air we long for.
No battle of the birthday is short.
the darker it gets the closer to the extraordinary
One, is the other side of the other.
These are your warrior
years drained of resources but
each day getting closer to yourself
to hearth within beginning to
warm you, though at times you think
there is only ashes but when you
stir them with your grace a fame leaps up.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111110011 1101101110 11001110 110110 11111101 1101110 1001101100 1100011 01011011 100010 1100101010 10111101 1111101 1101011 110110111 1110011101 001000101 111011 1010110110 1111111 111010111111 11010111 01011010100100 1101011010 111100 1111001 111010101 11010101 1111111 111010111 111110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,117
Words 221
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 31
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 882
Words per stanza (avg) 201

About this poem

I wrote this poem for a friend's birthday and then I realized that I was writing for everyone's birthday after what we have all been through. Covid insisting we bang into ourselves.

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Written on September 11, 2022

Submitted by judithalison.adams on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Judith Adams

Bio Judith Adams is an English-born poet living on Whidbey Island, Washington State. Judith has published four books of poetry and recorded several CDs of her work and performances. She has two children’s books published by Wynstones Press in England. Her poems have been published in magazines and anthologies and her poetry choreographed for Eurythmy performance in New York State. Judith has taken poetry to patients at the Cancer Care Alliance, read at the Frye Museum, Bainbridge Island Museum, Spokane Museum of Art, Third Place Books in Seattle, Wa State Correctional Institutions, libraries, State Hospitals, theatres, retreat centers and schools. Judith conducts poetry workshops for youth and adults and most recently is leading a Poetic Apothecary at Healing Circles Langley, WA. Judith was selected for the Washington State Speakers Bureau for 2017-18 and has selected to speak for another two years 2019/20. more…

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