Analysis of Him



Oh him
The smell of Old Spice and trees
The sound of boots thumping
And the whistles in the air
Oh him
The scruffy beard and curly short hair
The muscles of his strong arms
And the belly that jiggles a little when he laughs
Oh him
The arms that hold me tight and keeps others close
The eyes that look at me like I am a pot of gold
And the smile that spreads happiness
Oh him
The hands that are rough and dirty
The heart that holds a thousand memories
And the legs that have carried him a thousand miles
Oh him
The love of my life and my home
The man who will give me children
And the man who is mine
Oh him


Scheme AbcdAdefAghiAjbkAlmnA
Poetic Form
Metre 11 0111101 011110 0010001 11 010101011 0101111 001011010111 11 01111101101 0111111110111 00111100 11 01111010 0111010100 001111010101 11 01111011 01111110 001111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 607
Words 128
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 480
Words per stanza (avg) 127

About this poem

It is about finding the one man whom loves, protects and takes care of you.

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by fox63254 on October 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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