Analysis of My dear father

Ruqiya Naeem 2006 (Sadiqabad)



I was a due drop,
You made me an ocean
I was a tree,
You filled me with fruits
I was an ordinary human,
You made me special one
I was unable to move,
You taught me how to run
I was a poor soul,
You made me a rich one
I am unable thanks my good fate
That brought you into my life,
Thanks dad for coming into my life


Scheme ABCDBBEBFBGHH
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 111110 1101 11111 11110010 111101 1101011 111111 11011 111011 110101111 1110111 111100111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 316
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 71

About this poem

The poem I wrote is all about my father who stands with me through my thick and thin. The only one creature of Allah is my dad who al aya says I am the best.

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by Shabana.naeem515 on October 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ruqiya Naeem

My name is ruqiya Naeem. I belong to city Rahim yar kan,a district of Punjab province, Pakistan.I wrote this poem at my own. I am a student of 1st year class in Daanish school,RYK. more…

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