Analysis of MY PAIN
He came beaming with smiles
Making me go wild
Deep down I wondered
Even pondered
As to why he of all people
Would want to talk to me
Butterflies in my belly
Running here and there, very
Tiring
He kisses me on the lips
I go crazy finding where to sit
Later on, I find out it was a dare
Tears burst out of fear
Knowing the whole school would laugh
At my stupidity, that's fax
Parents making matters worse
Making me do things with force
Making me feel like I'm a black sheep
I can't get any sleep
I'm not a cultist hoe hard is that
To believe
This feeling is weird
That I would never tell
Anyone about my fear
Led by foolishness to fall in love
The second time
I trust again with my whole heart
Knowing that no one is there
To clean my tears
When I'm in fear
That I'll kill myself
I'm strong in mind
But weak at heart
I'd do a lot of things for people
But no one would for me
Never in my entire life
Did I think I would feel so worthless
I haven't really been through much
But I think teenage hood
Is enough trauma
Scheme | XXAABC CCXXX DEXX XXFFXX XXEXXG DXEXXG BCXXXXX |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (30%) Etheree (28%) |
Metre | 111011 10111 11110 1010 11111110 111111 100110 1010110 10 1101101 111010111 1011111101 11111 1001111 11010011 1010101 1011111 101111011 111101 110101111 101 11011 111101 100111 111001101 0101 11011111 1011111 1111 1101 1111 1101 1111 110111110 111111 10010101 111111110 11010111 11111 10110 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,025 |
Words | 219 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 5, 4, 6, 6, 6, 7 |
Lines Amount | 40 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 113 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
About this poem
In general, it's based on feelings.
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Written on October 06, 2022
Submitted by melodyblossom38 on October 06, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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