Analysis of Springtime this time?

Troy 11 1968 (Utah)



Springtime this time?

Oh, tender green shoot,
pushing through the cracked and dusty ground.
How many times you have tried to bring life?
Only to be trodden under egoic foot and dancing minstrels or drown with strong drink.

Yet you push forth again and again every spring
with the hope of bearing fruit.
Mortals can not till the soil or water the hard stubborn earth, only the Devine can nourish and cultivate your fragile growth.

Oh tender green shoot,
my wish for you is to become a great tree
that bears fruit for the weary traveler and humble souls to eat.

Oh dear Creator,
please help this little green life become a tree
that it may help others glorify Thee.

Such are the desires of my cracked and desolate heart.


Scheme x Axxx xax Abx xbb x
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11011 101010101 1101111111 10111010110101011111 1111010011001 1011101 101110111001101100011100101101 11011 11111101011 1111010100010111 11010 11110110101 111110101 11001011101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 727
Words 149
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

I am not a writer but this poem came out of my soul. Please receive the beauty.

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Written on October 13, 2022

Submitted by troy11 on October 13, 2022

Modified by troy11 on May 27, 2023

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