Analysis of you're the sea and i'm your shore

Jeet joshi 1998 (Uttarakhand)



I touch the sea like a shore, your wave to me
I stayed in the arms of your memories in your path
You are the ocean, you are the ocean, I am like a small algae inside you
Feel like I'm scattered like I'm scattered
Sometimes I swam, sometimes drowned, I'm a dream
Sometimes it stopped like your wait, sometimes the donation on you shined like its outside
You are the sea, my tangled shore
Just get me this moment your support yes you are the sea and I am your shore
Just like there is some distance from the ground of clouds,
But it is the love of the land that teaches the clouds to rise in the sun
Bending like this, the clouds still started raining like a pain of love,
That he too had more respect for the love of the land than pride.
The message of some love should also be for those changes.
Who sends those bud like a pegam to the ground,
But now the distance has become so much from the ground that now I did not try to come near.
That we have asked about his unique love story from the clouds
A little scared, the only answer came that
Whether a vajahat is worth or price is the hallmark of vajahat.
Just the price of Takdeer-e-Khuda's need should be justified.
I touch the sea like a shore, your wave to me
I stayed in the arms of your memories in your path. .


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,270
Words 259
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 991
Words per stanza (avg) 252

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Sometimes I laugh, sometimes we cry: Only the memories of it: The one who hurts me so much, Do not call them words or poems, sir, this is the pearl of my heart's words, for my sweetheart

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Jeet joshi

If something is perfect, your wish is just this prayer. If something has passed from that dream, then I should guard it and protect it, this is the only prayer. I should be like a moon that there is moonlight, this is the only prayer in your personality. Some moments should be with you, I should worship you, this is the only prayer. Make a few breaths and read the noise, this is the only prayer for your silence. Something connected with your realizations that you should stay away from the foolishness, this is the only prayer. I should get some blood, this is the only prayer for the pain of your body to be erased from sadness. Some songs should be made to become the raga of your life, this is the only prayer. This is the only prayer for your light to be called victory (jeet) Hey myself jeet joshi (victory) more…

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