Analysis of you're the sea and i'm your shore
Jeet joshi 1998 (Uttarakhand)
I touch the sea like a shore, your wave to me
I stayed in the arms of your memories in your path
You are the ocean, you are the ocean, I am like a small algae inside you
Feel like I'm scattered like I'm scattered
Sometimes I swam, sometimes drowned, I'm a dream
Sometimes it stopped like your wait, sometimes the donation on you shined like its outside
You are the sea, my tangled shore
Just get me this moment your support yes you are the sea and I am your shore
Just like there is some distance from the ground of clouds,
But it is the love of the land that teaches the clouds to rise in the sun
Bending like this, the clouds still started raining like a pain of love,
That he too had more respect for the love of the land than pride.
The message of some love should also be for those changes.
Who sends those bud like a pegam to the ground,
But now the distance has become so much from the ground that now I did not try to come near.
That we have asked about his unique love story from the clouds
A little scared, the only answer came that
Whether a vajahat is worth or price is the hallmark of vajahat.
Just the price of Takdeer-e-Khuda's need should be justified.
I touch the sea like a shore, your wave to me
I stayed in the arms of your memories in your path. .
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011011111 1100111100011 11010110101110110011 111101110 0111011101 01111110100101111111 11011101 1111101011110101111 111111010111 111011011100111001 1011011101010111 111110110110111 01011111011110 1111101101 1101010111101111111111 111101101110101 01010101011 1001111110111 101111111110 11011011111 1100111100011 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,270 |
Words | 259 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 21 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 991 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 252 |
About this poem
Sometimes I laugh, sometimes we cry: Only the memories of it: The one who hurts me so much, Do not call them words or poems, sir, this is the pearl of my heart's words, for my sweetheart
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