Analysis of The Old America



As a United States citizen my rights have been taken,
Even in 2the public I have been forsaken,
For exercisin2 ereg my freedom of speech they put me in jail,
And there I sat in the cold white cell,
America's supposed to be the land of free,
Yet after this how could it be,
Yet this continuously crosses my mind,
But it is the old America that I will always try to find.


Scheme AABCDDEE
Poetic Form
Metre 100101100111110 100010111010 1111101111101 011100111 010001110111 11011111 11010001011 1110101001111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 369
Words 80
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 288
Words per stanza (avg) 73

About this poem

I wrote this poem after going to jail for cussing at a Austin Police Officer.

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Written on October 08, 2022

Submitted by playboyplatinum187 on November 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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