Analysis of VAMPIRE KISSES
mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)
Pull down the tattered shades sit back put on some Grateful Dead American Beauty watch as the colors fade into the cloud of smoke
I do not want to go outside I am too fucking high so please turn down or turn off the light
I am leaning over the side of my bed trying not to vomit
why isn't the blood rushing to my head?
I am laying down, I am looking up
all that I see is blank, all that I see is the black of your eyes
Why on your face did you wear the look of attack? laying next to you I feel so cold, I am starting to become unable to think nor blink, I am unable to move. what exactly have you done?
It feels like you killed me only without a gun
what did we do, who the hell are you the fuck was good the best I ever had but now I'm starting to forget who I am. did I die am I one of your living dead?
I am something you feed off of, why do I feel so sick and like an albino look so pale? please tell me that this lust for blood is not for real?
why does my neck have two holes in it and hurts like a mother fucker, why is my naked body covered in red, and your drinking it up like you drank up the bar's finest spirits? please do not like this! please not like this! all you say is player I am sorry but you just received vampire kisses and now the tables are turned and now you are my bitch
My virginity I miss
why did I fuck you, why did I give you my unknown death when you gave me eternal life?
At least if it was for love and not because the look of your breast made my cock hard
is your heaven up above or down below? please let me know how I begin to give my own vampire kisses and start my own little army
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Characters | 1,626 |
Words | 360 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 4, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 83 |
Words per line (avg) | 23 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 156 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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